Your poem?
Your poem? Are you sure?
No, it’s just that
I’ve heard this story before.
I’ve heard this story from
The wise lady who comes in my dreams
She says how she’ll appear in yours
And how you’ll write a poem about “this”
She says how she loves how
Before summer storms, the sky turns grey,
And how she can’t tell apart the sky and my eyes,
And she says how, because of this, you fall apart every night.
She says how she waits for
The roses to rot and dry
And how it reminds her of my skin
And how this makes, not her but you, cry.
She says how beautiful
The dying sailor looks when he drowns in the sea
And how it reminds her of how I drown in my tears
And how much this makes you want to be with me.
She says how the sun sets
And cheats on the sky with the oceans
And how this makes her think of you and me,
And how it makes you want to touch the wires of poles that say”440 volts – Caution!”
She says how she will be telling you this story tonight
And how you’ll cut your veins right after,
And in between the two
You’ll write a poem on my favourite white dress
And end it with “bye love. i miss your laughter”
And she says how the next day I’ll open my wardrobe
And look for my white dress for the 27th date of this month
And how the dress will get bloody and stinky,
After I read your poem
After I bleed, crawl and grunt.
And she says how when we’ll meet again
You’ll call this poem yours
And she says how I’ll ask you twice
“Your poem?
Your poem?
Are you sure?”
Never read something like this! Nice!
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Thanks, Priya ❤️
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Pleasure!
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Amazing read, a cool experience of summer 😊
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Hehe. Thank you for reading ❤️
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Wow wow wow interesting and amazing
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Thank you ❤️
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Wonderful 💕
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Thank you so much.
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This is so good. Deep and poignant🙂
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Thank you,Ramyani❤️
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Amazing!!
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Thanks!!
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Are you familiar with Anais Nin yet, Anupriya? If so, you might recall her saying that making a new friend is to see the world through new eyes. To me, the best poetry is like that — it’s a glimpse of the world through new eyes.
That’s most likely what I like best about your poems. This one strikes me as an especially good example of that.
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Never heard of her.
But thank you❤️ You’re very kind 🙂
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Interesting. I wonder if dream ever fulfilled , nobody would cry. I see many wonderful dreams, I wish they come true.
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Oh yes! That is true. Dreams can be fulfilled but only when you work hard enough.
Thanks for stopping by ❤️
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Wow! Super beautiful! You write so well, Anupriya. 😍💛
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Thank you, Ellen! Thank you❤️
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This is so amazing 👌❣️
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Thanks ❤️
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Oh this was exceptional. Absolutely well done!!
I am you sure 😉
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Thank you Moushmi ❤️❤️❤️
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I have nominated you for Liebster Award! Enjoy 😊
https://popsiclesociety.com/2019/04/01/liebster-award-2/
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Wonderful words!
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Thank you!
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Good question! And whose words are they anyway?
Well done.
🙂
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They’re the words of the wise lady. She should get the credit!
Thanks for reading ❤️
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west be on your
best the test
east in the least
the
sun come s up!
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That is a little complicated, don’t you think?
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not at all .
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Well, then maybe I’m bad at understanding poems made up of phrases.
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no offense you are fifteen and i am fifty seven. that s the thing.
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Why would I be offended? You’re 57. I can learn from you. Mind explaining me your little poem?
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it is about directions . up and down sad and happy basic feelings
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Oh! I see. I could guess it was about directions but it felt a little incomplete.
Anyways, thanks for stopping by 🙂
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I’m sixty two and Anupriya seems to understand poetry at least about as well as I do. Your mileage might vary, but she has even taught me things.
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I nominated you for Mystery Blogger Award: https://theshubhamstories.wordpress.com/2019/04/02/my-1st-mystery-blogger-award-nomination/
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[Chuckles] that’s a real good piece lady!
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Thank you very much, Gentleman!
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this is a long poem.and i wish your dream comes true..and does that 27 says of birth date? 🙂
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I would never want this dream to come true.
By 27th date of this month I meant going out with someone (dating someone)
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I see…Best luck to u
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💞💞💞💞
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Dang kid….I really liked that
Are you sure you aren’t 40 or so? 15…really..? Wow.
Fyi…thanks for reading and liking my stories. You are generous and kind and to young to be thinking of lost loves. Although I remember how feelings and emotions run fast and high at your age. One other thing. If I followed your poem right the lady invades your space is a spirit or just your imagination? Because I have always had spirits of dead people hanging around. And sometimes they do want to help. They will invade my sleep and tell me what to write
Didn’t know if that was same with you. Or…he’ll maybe I’m just crazy old man.
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Thank you for the appreciation, Sir. It means a lot.
Yes. Feelings and emotions run really fast and really high at my age. I’m trying not to be one of those teen-agers who is affected by them.
Unfortunately, the lady is just my imagination. But I wish she was a spirit. I wish she helped me.
You’re not a crazy old man. You’re wise and you have seen things that people have to spend 70 years to see. Can you imagine that? Most people kill themselves by 30. Duh!
Thank you for stopping by and have a beautiful day ahead! I am hoping to learn great things from you 🙂
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I am very greatly delighted that you have an appreciation for my words. There is such a huge gap between the young And old its hard to see similarities. But I’ve been young and its a wonderful time of life. Good luck.
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Thank you, Sir! 🙂
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Some are raised with good manners enough to call me sir. Bit if we are to be friends I’d rat her be just Randy…ok?
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Okay.
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Thank you….i live in the usa..do you mind if i know your country? I have always enjoyed friends from other cultures. Makes life so much more fun and interesting.
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You can check the “About me” page if you like 🙂
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Very beautiful piece, i don’t know how old you are, i’m always wrong by guessing age, but you look very young and very tale tend to write such a piece, i would like have this kind of women in my head sometimes, specially when i’m lost, so she could help me, to find myself🤗
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Thank you dear ❤️ I’m 15 years old.
Me too. I imagine people sometimes. Thanks for reading 💕
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You are very welcome🤗
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Uniquely beautiful dear 😊❤
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Thank you❤️
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Glad you have returned to WP..I missed your presence at the poetry table, for a few days. You are very insightful person.
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Thank you very much!
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Your are most welcome.
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Nice words.
I also write poems and would love to have your suggestions on it. Please check my blog : http://www.alienicpoems.wordpress.com
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