I like silence.
But last night was very loud.
The silence was heavy. Dense.
I was quiet
But the walls said that my chest was rumbling.
Strangely I couldn’t hear it at all.
“Poetry in 140 characters.”
Are you guys writing for NaPoWriMo 2019?
( I am not.)
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Anupriya Indites 
Thanks for the lovely post.
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🙂
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Nice
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Thanks
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Silence, wondrous moment to call different muses
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Yes. Thank you for reading ❤️
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😘😘😘😘🌹🌹🌹🌹
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So beautiful!❤️
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Thank you ❤️
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Thank you for this❤️
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The silence was heavy is so inspired.
Really felt the mood of your poem with that line. Beautiful xxx
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Thank you, Fiery❤️ I’m so glad you liked this.
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NaPoWriMo or not, I still loved this one.
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Thank you ❤️
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I see in you work the need to address dichotomies. I have felt the same silence…I wrote a poem long ago title that
Was titled…There is a silence….I will post it this morning.
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I am eagerly waiting for your post❤️ I would love to read your poem!
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There is a silence is posted.
Please read it I would love to hear ur pic.
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Your poem is brilliant. It’s deep. The last 3 lines are beautiful!
By the way, there is no comment option on your blog and that is why I couldn’t comment on your post.
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Thanks. That means a lot to me coming from a talent like you
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I should be the one thanking you. I’ve learnt how to write by reading poems like the one you wrote!
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I have never heard the real slice, silence can be heavy and it can be to difficult to carry it on❤️
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It’s just a matter of thoughts and psychology, Ilona. Silence cannot be heavy or dense 🙂
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Yes is all depend about what kind of thoughts we have🤗
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Exactly! Have a good day ahead❤️
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You too🤗
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❤️😊
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I recall spending a day and evening in as much silence as can be had in a city. That night, I went outside for some fresh air. I looked up, saw the moon, and had the distinct impression that I had just heard it ring like a china dinner plate dropped on a table cloth.
I quite liked the poem, Anupriya. I especially loved the mysterious imagery of the last two lines.
I’m wondering, though . Is the word “quite” a typo for “quiet”?
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Well, that must have been a little bit of a surrealistic experience.
Thank you for the appreciation, Paul.
Oh dear! This is embarrassing. I didn’t notice the mistake. Sorry about that.
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It was surprising. It wasn’t like I actually heard it though. I was right on the border between thinking I heard the moon ring and thinking I was imagining the moon rang.
I make typos all the time. Once I went through a poem three times. Thought I caught them all. But then a friend came along and spotted four more. LOL!
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That’s “quite” interesting.
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Lovely poem. What is NaPoWriMo?
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Thank you ❤️
It is National Poetry Writing Month – April. It is something rather historical. April is dedicated to poetry, writing, writers, publishing and more.
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Ok. It’s short form thanks . 😊I have posted articles on this topic yesterday.
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Yes. I read the article 😊
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Ok.
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Beautiful! What if all nights turn out to be loud like this?!! 😰
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Thank you ❤️
We’ll have a tough life then
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Yes! And unfortunately many people have to endure that tough life!! Sad
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Yes
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