Wrap up the clouds,
Bring in the rain.
My thoughts these days,
Drive me insane!
One moment, I’m calm,
The other I’m strange.
They say that I’ve lost it!
I can’t remember my name.
Chuckles and sobs?
Constant they remain!
For most of my efforts,
Go in vain.
I can’t understand if
I am the same.
It’s past two now
And down the lane
I go, with thoughts,
Weaved in my brain.
Letters clotting
Each of my veins,
I create my pain,
I indite something sane!
I need some rain,
To feel whole again.
I need some sunny – salty rain.
To feel my stems and colours again.
I need to feel complete again.
Beautiful expression.
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Thank you ma’am π
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Most welcome!
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Nice one! Loved it!
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Thank you so much
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Nice lines… Anupriya
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Thank you!
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Very good! Must be a rainy kind of day.
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Thanks! Yeah
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Wah
Especially the lines
I need some rain
To feel whole again…
So deep
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Thank you!
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You make sadness so beautiful π
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Thank you!!
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Replenished ,you must feelπ
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Yup! Thank you for reading!
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Liked it Anupriya π€
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Thanks, Aman!
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The rain washes the negative sensations of the soul and makes your verses an expression of your feeling. A beautiful poem that is enjoyed reading it.
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Thank you very much!
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Beautifully expressed!!
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Thanks!
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Beautiful, Anupriya!
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Thank you!
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Too good.. beautifully presented.. ππΌπππΌππΌππ
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Thanks!!
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As if you were describing actually how i feel these days! I can’t find proper words to describe this piece bcs they just won’t do it justice! It’s really great and i clap this one!! ππππ
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Thank you so much, Elber! I’m so glad you liked it β€οΈ
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