You liked grey because of you mom’s ashes.
Black because of our dead daughter’s eyes.
But red was your favorite
Because your hands looked complete with my blood on them.
“Poetry in 140 characters”
Why don’t you write one too? ❤
You liked grey because of you mom’s ashes.
Black because of our dead daughter’s eyes.
But red was your favorite
Because your hands looked complete with my blood on them.
“Poetry in 140 characters”
Why don’t you write one too? ❤
Omg, the last line took my breath away, seriously. I didn’t anticipate it. Deep poem though ☺️
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Thank you Ramyani ❤
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I didn’t see this coming! Splendid!
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Thank you ❤
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Pleasure
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Ahaaa dis is beautiful piece mate ✔️ 💯
Loved it totally, specially conclusion part !!
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Thank you 🙂 ❤
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Pleasure always 😊
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Wow. Dark and powerful x
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Thanks ❤️
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very powerful! Great share ❤
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Thank you ❤️
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Woah! That’s dark with a deep meaning! Great post!
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Thank you!
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Welcome!
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Oh my god.. This is like more than the appreciative words in the dictionary.. You are extraordinary
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This means a lot Neha! Thank you❤️
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My pleasure and you really deserve it
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😊❤️
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😃
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Ah, liked that ending!
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Thank you
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Pleasure.
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You took my breath away🦋
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Means a lot❤️ thank you
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😳❤️ unbelievable.. great one
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Thank you so much ❤️
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Happy Holi
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Happy holi to you too🙂
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happy holi Anu..
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Same to you
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Dark, yet brilliant
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Thank you ❤️
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I read it few times, really liked it🤗
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Thank you❤️
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So macabre! Reminded me of reading Poe 😊..well done👌👍
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Thank you❤️
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Short and sweet
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Thanks!
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So deep!
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Thank you
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You’re most welcome💟
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This one was pretty intense!!
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Thanks!
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Short and simple yet elegant..
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Thank you 😊
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This is so powerful. I was blown away by it. Great work!
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Thank you!
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What a poignant reminder that something quite chilling, almost repulsive, can be both charming and skillfully executed. Thank you for that one!
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Thank you ❤️ This comment made my day!
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Glad to hear that, Anupriya!
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Dark, vivid, but damn good!
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Thank you!
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