I see you longing for death.
Like it’s a beautiful dress you long to own
To wear.
So you beg your mother to get you the dress.
Because you’re too little to get it yourself.
(I look down at my wrist.
Oh! It looks just like my mother’s)
Will you beg your mother to get you death?
If she got you the dress?
Or if she chose the dress for you?
I wrote this poem for a friend of mine.
How do you try to help your friends in situations like this?
Share your thoughts in the comments section below 🙂
Deep thoughts…the comparison is very creative!
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Thank you💕
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Very deep
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Thank you 🙂
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Very intense
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts 💕
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You’re welcome 💝
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💕
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Lovely and deep🦋I wish you a nice day.
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Thank you dear! Have a good day ahead💕
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Thank you so much for the update.
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🙂
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Deep!
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Thank you
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Reblogged this on The Shubham Stories.
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Thank you very much ❤️
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The depth and intensity of these lines written by you Anupriya took my heart away.. Away into a different land of emotions and feelings.. Where I could feel the winds and the tears rolling down my cheeks.. ❤
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Wow. That means a lot! Thank you so much❤️
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😃
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An intense feeling of deep affection could be put into words in such a way, I could never imagine.very appreciable.keep it up🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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nice
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Love the depth and intensity! 😊
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Thank you
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My pleasure 😊
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Amazing. 🙂
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Thank you ❤
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💖💖💖💕💕💕
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I found this poem distressing. There are far too many young people who see death as their only way out of difficult life circumstances. Wishing you happiness and success! ❤
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Yes. I had written this poem for one of my friends. I don’t know if it helped her but she liked it. Thanks for stopping by❤️
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💖💖
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Thank you
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Loved this poem.. 🤗😊
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Thanks!
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My pleasure 😊
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When the verses drop the intensity of human tragedy, you say it with that depth that comes to make us suffer the soul. They are really great.
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Thank you ❤️
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I’m curious as to the inspiration for this poem.
🙂
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A friend.
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❤️
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Good that you cared to reflect the thoughts of your friend.🙂
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The thoughts are mine but my friend was going through something bad and that made me write something for her.
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Must have meant a zillion to her.Bright daylight in the dark.
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Maybe. Thank you ❤️
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been dead
aka non functional
twice
not nice
you re too
young
to consider
these things
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No. I am not.
Thank you for reading!
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Oh this is poignant but Beautifully weaved
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Thanks Sakshi
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My pleasure
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Profound writing..
Well done 😍
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Thanks!
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❤️
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Deep thought.
Thanks for sharing.
❤
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Thank you for reading ❤️
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My pleasure.
Hope you would like our initiative.
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Sure
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❤
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Don’t know is it deep or written in agony! I hope it to be a figments of imagination. Liked it Anu!
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Thank you, Abhay!
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